Okay, so I wrote other stories and was like, "my first story's ending really sucks and is really rushed, so I'll put an alternate ending." That will be up either later today, or tomorrow. If you go to my profile, it's under "And We Continued On to a Different Happy Ending" . Kinda a different story, but the beginning is totally the same, and could be read together or separately. Will put the link in later, when it's posted.