Hi person reading this!
I'm SO sorry that it's taken me so long to update. My laptop has been having some problems, and I've had writers block on top of that. Sorry it's so short, it's all I had time to write.
I'm working with a friend on another story, which I hope to post soon. Hopefully, I can update more frequently, and have more action rather than dialog.
Any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be most appreciated! If you like my story, please tell me! It's nice to get feedback, and it lets me know that people are interested in my stories!
Looking outside, Link pondered the situation. "How are we going to do this? There must be hundereds of moblins out there!"
Raymond scoffed. "I could take them all on my own with the Force!"
"You shouldn't be so confident. When you're that confident, there's something you don't know."
"Whatever. Hey, if we are going to fight these things, shouldn't we get bigger first?"
"Ah, well you see... I don't really know how to reverse the spell."
"Well you see, after I shrank us, I realized I forgot something. So I went to change back, and tried to use the spell in reverse. It didn't work."
"So... we're stuck here?"
"I think so, yes."
"Maybe you could have thought of that before you shrunk us?"
"I thought I knew the whole spell..."
Link sighed and paced over to the other side of the room. "Maybe the Minish know something. I'll go ask."
He left the chamber, and Raymond looked out of the hole again.
The monsters seemed to be growing in number, he had a hard time seeing any of the forest through them all. The entire chamber was reverberating with the footsteps of the pig monsters. "What did Link call them?" Raymond thought "Oh yeah, moblins."
He decided to try something out. Using the Force, he lifted a twig he saw lying near the stump. The Moblins all looked up at it, unsure of what was going on. He threw the twig a few feet away away from him, and the Moblins all chased it, hooting exitedly. Raymond smiled coyly. "Hey Link! I think I figured out what we can do!"