Hey!

So I've been inactive on for, what, two years now? Three? I'm not sure. For the most part, I've moved to AO3. That said, I still get emails about my fics here, and I still remember them, of course.

However, when I read ADD, I cringe. Outwardly. And also inwardly. It's bad writing, the beginning chapters are broken up weirdly, the later chapters' plot points don't make that much sense, etc. etc. This is where this reader (you) comes in. Assuming you've read the entire story, you can help me do what needs to be done for this story: a complete rewrite. What I need in order to do that is comments, PMs, whatever telling me as many of the following things as you want:

The plot of the story, or a section of plot, etc. There's a lot of writing for me to muddle through, and if you can even do one or two chapters, telling me what they are, that'd be great. It's been a long, long time since I wrote most of this (wow, I feel old now). It can be any chapter, any section, any chunk, etc. that you want.

Plot points you liked.

Plot points you didn't like.

Characters you liked.

Characters you didn't like.

and anything else you want to add.

Thank you in advance to everyone that does this. If this happens in a vaguely timely manner, I can start churning out a rewrite within a month or two, hopefully, but I can't do anything until I have the plot, and, well...there's just so much...

Have a great day!