I've decided to post the revised chapters in a new story of the same name. Ill re-title the old version so you all can tell them apart more easily. I've gone from simply revising the story to changing major parts of it completely. I'll leave this version of MSKA up so that I can compare the two more easily while I work. Updates and story pacing will be slower than before, since I'm putting more thought and time into it than I did here in the old version. I hope you all end up liking the new version better than the old, otherwise my revisions will have been pointless...

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