Jazz smiled at Chris looking into his eyes. "Well, I think this guy likes me even though he's taken and i kind of like him back." Jazz said.
(LOL she could be describing Kyle or Chris tehee)8/28/2011 #934 Report
Was she talking about him? Chris smiled. "I think you should go for the guy, if he likes you too." He said
(Oh wow this is funni)8/28/2011 #935 Report
Jazz smiled. "But the girl he's with will be angry." She sighed.8/30/2011 #936 Report
Jazz smiled, "I just wish he'd make the first move, i mean what if i was wrong and he didn't like me back."8/31/2011 #938 Report
Did she not know that he liked her too? Was she talking about him?8/31/2011 #939 Report
"I'm so sorry, both for interrupting and not helping you sooner. Have you been given your room keys?" he asked, giving the people in his office a warm, friendly and very apologetic smile.9/2/2011 #942 Report
Chris looked smiling at Anthony. "No we haven't been given our room keys." He said.9/2/2011 #943 Report
"Once again, my apologies," said the embarrassed concierge. Quickly, he tapped the computer back to life. "Your name, please?"9/2/2011 #944 Report
"I'm Chris Greybeck, and That's Jazz Miller, we came here seperatly."9/2/2011 #945 Report
"Ah, yes, Mr. Greybeck. Here's your room key; should you need anything else, please feel free to come back here and I will assist you in any way possible."9/2/2011 #946 Report
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