Know what I just found out I dislike.. Bella's that present themselves as birthday present to Canon Edward. It's just... so manipulative and conniving. First, having sex with Him is something SHE wants. Second, if he denies her or look hesitant, SHE guilt's him or makes him feel bad by starting to cry like a child in these type of fics. Third, he now looks and feels like a asshole if he doesn't risk losing control and fuck her.

Also hate when Edward is the virgin of the story but it never it made a big deal... Yet when it's Bella.. It's basically the a whole plot point for the story.