So, this is Troublesome-monkey-sama1516 signing in. Well hello, I don't know who bothers reading my profile, but greetings all the same. :D
Name: Dianne... (That name is sufficient, yes?)
Sex: Female, biologically speaking.
DOB: Too old, I forgot
Location: Here, there, under your bed, you know...
Occupation: Dog Whisperer (seriously)
Lovely Complex. Monster. Bloody Monday. Guilty Crown. Gosick. Doubt. Ghost Hunt. Tantei Gakuen Q. Dragon Ball. Dragon Ball Z. Yu Yu Hakusho. Ranma . Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei. Ghost Stories. Death Note. The Wallflower. The World God Only Knows. Darker than Black. Tenjou Tenge. Axis Powers Hetalia. Etc...
Dexter. Avatar: the Last Airbender. Courage the Cowardly Dog. Invader Zim. Hey Arnold! Blues Clues. Popeye the Sailor man. Teen Titans. Etcc...
Blink by Malcolm Gladwell. Little Brother by Cory Doctorow. The Dead by James Joyce. As I Lay Dying by William Faulker. The Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad. Why We Make Mistakes by Joseph T. Hallinan. The Man who Mistook his Wife for a Hat by Oliver Sacks. Percy Jackson Series by Rick Riordan. Artemis Fowl Series by Eion Colfer. Etc...
Suikoden Series. Ar tonelico Series. Tales Series. .Hack series. Atelier Iris Series. Sims Series. Okami. Resident Evil. Disgea Series. Persona Series. Dragon Quest Series. Mass Effect. Fable Series...a lot of other series...
1) Getting many favorites and story alerts but no reviews. True, I suppose it's a good thing and I am thankful my readers care enough to read the next chapter, but I am not getting input on my own work. I need to know what I am doing wrong, that way I may fix it and get better.
2) Absolutely bland plots with sudden love blooming out of nowhere. I do not believe in love at first sight, though I truly adore Miyazaki movies that support it. It just seems so false and unrealistic to the point where I wonder if they were shot by some magical love bug. It just doesn't happen like that.
3) Sudden changes in character POV. It is nice to know what the character is thinking at that moment, but that doesn't warrant the sudden change mid action from one to another. If you want that affect I suggest going 3rd person to just dwell on all the character's minds. It really distracts from the plot.
And that is it about it me. Go forth and read my stories if you wish. Thank you very much. :D