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Joined Mar '08

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my precious people by Serious Sam

yet again with a little extra help by third fang

team 8 by S'TarKan

That Dobe? by Ikari666

currently in the works

Naruto

path the wind chooses - a naruto epic (hiatus)

breaking light- dark fic concept by NarHina

Whirlpool restriction- story concept by thebeardedone writing with permission. from Konoha's pet shop chapter 37 nucknin

built from ashes-a the take on of perfect lionheart's challenge. (let's see if someone can finish the challenge.)

unnamed- NaruHina (dont know if ill write anything else for Naruto fanfic.) romantic and humor tags.

Challenges

Bijuu’s hope challenge

The sage of six paths valued all of his children, bijuu including. Towards the end of his life, he saw the possibility of all that he saw coming to undone. Indra and Asura fighting and undoing his work was sadly predictable. So was humanities act in imprison his other children the bijuu to use as weapons. However, he hoped for the best but gave all his children tools to help preserve the peace and to work together. The gifts of peace he left to Indra and Asura was lost to there conflict and the sands of time.

However, his gift to the bijuu was not he gave his non-human children one single jutsu. That all 9 needed to perform as one to use, the just gave them the ability to send the minds back to an earlier point in time. The flow of time is strong however so they can only go back in time 10 years at most.

When Sasuke uses his gifted power to try to incase them into stone then start his revulsion they act. Not willing to let events unfold while they do nothing. However, in there worry and hast they forgot one detail. They were all sealed 10 years ago.

Challenge requirements.

- Kurama can not contact Naruto before he first meets him during his training to control Kurama chakra with Jiraiya. This can be played for laughs as the Bijuu have access to there host so Kurama is basically neutered till he contacts Naruto. (ie any time Naruto tapes into Kurama’s charger brief massages can be passed on to him. But the message can't be easily understood. cant be know for sure what is happening and it's only brief half a sentence message.)

- no human form for the bijuu. Meaning if one of the bijuu hosts die or escape they can't just hide by looking human. They are 50 story tall charka monsters they cant shrink down any more then Gamabunta could.

- the three tails or Isobu can't be released until after the wave mission if it is shown.

- Show how a more corruptive and honestly one that cares about more than freedom, Shukaku changes Gaara. How bad or good Gaara’s seal is up to the writer. As while as how much this changes his relationships or the invasion is up to the writer but there should be some changes since Shukaku was part of the reason Gaara was so homicidal

- Intentionally or not the bijuu working with there host more starts to build up the shinobi alliance and their actions against Akatsuki.

- When Naruto meets another container and touches them he gets a chakra boost. As learning the bijuu name and allowing a true acceptance gives a bit of a power boost. (this can apply to anyone. A person will not get Naruto-level chakra capacity by meeting them but they could double or triple there chakra if they did.) This boost is restoring the powers of the sage of 6 paths to him.

Suggesting

- Kurama doesn’t like Sakura anymore then he does then the Uchiha she has hit Naruto far too much. And the fox is positive Naruto is stupider because of it. (could be a reason to push Naruto towards Hinata i.e. the nice girl that he is fighting for.)

- Kurama makes a reference of the only time he came close to escaping Naruto Hinata almost death against pain.

- (three tails) reforms and is trying to move around helping but cause problems as he is a giant chakra monster and everything else is human size.

- (8 tails) though bee gets ay to make amends to the Hyuga clan. It should be a slow process giving all the bad blood between the two. And given what they did do to Neji’s father's body. Before any research is completed or stopped.

- The different Jinchuriki share massaged between them vie there Bijuu

Naruto's Hinata harem

Naruto is suddenly popular with the ladies. I make sense even if everyone is trying to figure out why its happen. After all, all the ladies are Hinata.

Scenario 1- during a mission Hinata is hit by a jutsu that's designed to separated Inuzuka during one of there partner companion jutsu. Though she seems unharmed the jutsu does have an effect. Different parts of Hinata are separated from each other. (if the jutsu can be reversed is up to the author)

Example the Kunoichi, heiress, and maiden.

Would prefer if use Scenario 1 that the spit isn't based on a single emotion and that the different parts have key memories that are important to them and view the same memory differently.

Scenario-2 through unknown means (if means is every discovered is up to writer) Hinata's from different dimension come to cannonish verse. (again if they return or not is up to writer but would prefer not.) not knowing if or when they can return they make the best of what they can by trying to making a life there. Of course, this means getting closer to the object of there affections Naruto Uzumaki.

Example of different Hinata's: perfect heiress, Jinchuuriki Hinata, prankster Hinata, AMBU Hinata. RTN Hinata.

Would prefer if use Scenario 2 that one version of Hinata is from the road to ninja world.

Challenge requirements,

there must be at least three versions of Hinata. Two would mean it was a three-way relationship, not a harem.

No one should know something is happening at first and some confusion should take place with the different versions of Hinata.

Naruto should notice something specific about the different versions of Hinata that others missed the same way that he caught lee's training scars.

Hinata's suiters

Hinata has suiters from all over the elemental nations trying to win her hand in marriage. However, she only has eyes for Naruto. So while others are failing to woo her she is succeeding to woo Naruto. The reason that Hinata has so many suiter is up to the writer. (huge dowry, Hiashi dies and Hinata is set to become the next clan head. Schemes of the village and/or clan elders. Bonus points to those that come up with an original reason.)

Requirements:

  • all of Hinata's suiters much try and gain her love. (meaning no forcing her to marry them) This can due to ancient law, the Daimyo is a romantic or Hiashi isn't an ass and wants to see his daughters happily married. Again bonus points to anyone who comes up with a unique reason.
  • Hinata in her efforts of winning Naruto's heart helps him to understand his emotions better
  • a couple of her suitors must be from enemy nations. After all, nothing brings peace like marriage and legitimate babies.
  • Hinata must misunderstand a few of the gestures aimed at her. (either she things she got in the way of something and caused an issue or thinks the gesture was aimed at someone else.)
  • at least 2 of the suiters must be from Konoha 11 and use the opportunity to arrange a date between Hinata and Naruto at their families dime.
  • Suggestions (meaning stuff I think would be neet to see but are in no way requirements)

  • one of the villain's schemes ruined as a by-product of the suitors trying and failing to win Hinata's heart.
  • One of the villains redeemed by the end of the story
  • a working couple formed by the failed attempt to woo Hinata.
  • quotes

    Old age and treachery will overcome youth and skill.-unknown (if anyone knows where it's from let me know)

    a closed mind and fearful heart losses no arguments-unknown

    Mai nodded, “He said that in battle and in everything we do we should remember the following and know it to be true:

    ‘If I defend, you will not break through,

    If I attack, you shall fall,

    If I give chase, you shall be caught,

    If I protect, no one shall be harmed,

    And if I take your life, I had no choice.’” – mai a naruto fanfic by morningtheft

    "You're mad!" "If I wasn't, then it'd probably never work." --Pirates of the Caribbean: At Worlds End

    “When you can’t walk you crawl. When you can’t crawl…” “You find somebody to carry you.” –firefly

    There was a pretty girl, so I danced! –Kakashi from naruto

    “The three most powerful things in the universe are true love, faith that comes from your soul and human stupidity. Sadly human stupidity seems to beat the first two.”- Seth Tillander (some guy I know)

    It’s the quiet ones who change the universe- b5

    Always forgive your enemies- nothing annoys them so much."- Oscar Wilde

    "Let's have a toast! To Zuko! Who knew that after all those times he tried to snuff us out, he'd be our hero!" -Sokka, Avatar the Last Airbender

    "I have something to say about Bush and the Iraq war. And to you Republicans who think it unfair, go listen to my stuff about Clinton. You wanna elect Bush then that's the prick I'm Gonna yell at! You elect Kerry, I'll yell at him. My problem is with authority!" - Lewis Black

    "A person is smart, people are dangerous, panicky animals and we both know it." MIB

    love without trust only brings pain, trust without love is hollow. to live with one and not the other is to live in state that can break your very soul.- unknown

    I wish neither to possess nor to be possessed.

    I no longer covet paradise.

    More important, I no longer fear hell.

    The medicine for my suffering

    I had within me from the very beginning.

    But I did not take it.

    My ailment came from within myself,

    But I did not observe it.

    Until this moment.

    Now I see that I will never find the light

    Unless, like the candle, I am my own fuel,

    Consuming myself. –Bruce Lee

    HOLY BOOK OF LOG EXCERPTS:

    Honorary Member of The Book of Log.

    If you worship the holiness that is the log, copy and paste this section onto your profile... although you may want to change the comments

    Position: Log Worshiper

    Possible Book of Log Positions:

    Log Worshiper: Beginning position. No requirements

    Log Priest: You have created at least 1 Naruto related fanfic that frequently (every 2-4 chapters) praises the almighty log and actually fits into the story

    Log Pope (there can be more than 1 pope... its safer that way): you have created 3 naruto related fanfics that frequently praise the almighty log

    OR the Fanfic that already occasionally praises the log has at least 400 reviews

    OR you create a (decently made) Naruto fanfic focused on praising the log... log forbid.

    Excerpt of the log number 124: when using the log to escape a fire jutsu, it is Konoha custom to write an apology letter to the log, and depending on rank of jutsu escaped from depicts how many words are needed. c-rank, two thousand, B-rank, one thousand five hundred, a-rank, one thousand. only S-rank and higher or excused from the writing of the letter. even then, it is still recommended.

    Log excerpt number 231: if Konoha shinobi celebrate the holiday of Christmas, then it is required that they put gifts under the Christmas log. Use of a full tree is an insult to the log and if found out that shinobi is uneligible from using the log for a period of two months.

    Log excerpt number 437: Use of the log in a situation that clearly could be avoided using a variety of other methods or techniques is looked down upon. In order to repent for such actions, the following steps should be taken:

    For every dent caused by your replacement, you shall plant one sapling.

    For every stab wound caused by your replacement, you shall plant five

    saplings.

    For every hole in the log caused by your replacement you shall plant ten

    saplings.

    For every detached piece of the log caused by your replacement you shall

    plant one sapling per square inch of detached log.

    For a destroyed and unusable log caused by your replacement you shall plant

    twenty-five saplings.

    'and the willow sayeth unto the ninja: wherefore dost I weep? 'tis tears of joy, as thy kin and mine together fell thine foes, who would bring the ax and torch to the wood. the log ist thine ally, and mine kin. calling upon the log, is to call upon me. to aid thee in battle, i weep my tear of joy.

    and the ninja spoke: yea, thee and thine kin shall forever be blessed among me and mine kin. for thine bravery will never be forgotten.'

    -book of the log, song of the willow, verses 1-4

    'as the log takes your place, you become the log. the log becomes you. for a moment, you are an extension of the logs blessing unto ninja.'

    -book of the log, chronicle of the replacement verse 3

    'you are fools! your log is but a mockery of the power of ninja!- the ninja from the desert declared. and the people shook their heads.

    you have been denied the log for a long time, sandwalker. we cannot force you to see the glory of the log but know this. when the time comes, and you have no other allies to call upon, the log will hear your prayers, and aid you.'

    -book of the log, redwood journals verses 15-16

    'and as the smoke cleared, his foe stared in awe at the log. blackened and charred, the log crumbled. the ninja, filled with righteous wrath, fell upon his foe and slew him. he made his way to the log, and wept. his companion, the log that had accompanied him through so many battles, was no more. he spoke thus to his fallen companion: though now you have fallen in battle, you rest where the logs forever grow. the forest of life called for you, and you answered its call, as you did mine. I thank you, my friend.'

    -book of the log, honor of the forest canticle I, verses 78-82

    'he despaired, for, in this place of stone and earth, there was no logs to be found. reaching out with all his might, he begged for a log in the forsaken wasteland. and he was answered, and saved by the log, in a place where there were none.

    -book of the log, wanderers saga, verses 7-9

    'the log took his place and fell, forever into the abyss. the people, hearing of this, railed against him, in such numbers he swore to never endanger another log again. for many years, he fought without the log, growing more and more weary with each passing day. finally, he came across a foe that was too strong for him. as his life was about to end, he felt a familiar pull, and found himself out of harms way, seeing a log in his place. his stunned foe was felled in his stupor, and he approached the log, he knew it, for it was the same that fell so long ago. he asked of the log: why did you endanger yourself for me again? have you not done enough for me? and the log spoke: it is my duty and our bond. we exist to save the ninja, and they exist to save the trees. we both play a part, for which I am content.'

    -book of the log, honor of the forest canticle II, verses 59-70

    Let it be known that it is absolutely forbidden to willingly perform the technique known as "1000 years of death" on a log. It is also equally frowned upon for one to replace oneself with a holy log for the purpose of avoiding said technique. The punishment for such actions is at least 6 months of banishment from the use of the holy log.

    For the log is with thee, my friend. The most holy of the forest shall save thee. Shall be thy salvation! And yet, the log asks for nothing in return.

    "Respect the sacrifice of the log that you may continue your life! You have been spared for another chance! Nurture the Life-Giving Living Sap that flows within the depths of the LOG! For the log has saved countless and will save countless more!"

    (Contributed by Margulide)

    The log is my savior; I shall not char.

    It burneth in my stead: it protecteth me from the flames.

    It confoundeth mine enemies: it covereth mine escape.

    Yea though I walk through the compounds of Uchiha, I will fear no Katon; for thou art with me, thy bark and thy sap they shieldeth me.

    Thou provideth me with shielding from the kunai of my enemies: from their shuriken and their wrath; my gratitude is never-ending.

    Surely splinters and termites shall follow me all my ninja life, but I shall remain devoted to The Log forever!

    (Contributed by Reader-Of-Many)

    - Log Oath #23

    "As the two titans clashed, the world stood at stand still. The black flame of the heretic Uchiha Madara blazing fiercely against the holy life-giving power of the Log Pope Senju Hashirama. As the ebony flame threatens to vanquish the divination of the Holy Log, it all came to naught as the Shodai Hokage drew all of his power to quench the abomination, thus ending the terror which threatened the continuity of the blessing from the holy sap."

    (Contributed by Kaori)

    "For as much as it hath pleased The Log of its great mercy to take unto itself the soul of our dear brother here departed, we, therefore, commit his body to the ground; earth to earth, branches to branches, trunk to trunk; in sure and certain hope of the return to eternal life, through our savior the Log, who shall change our vile body, that it may be like unto its glorious body, according to the mighty working, whereby it is able to subdue all things to itself. “

    "As the seventh moon cycle passed, the Holy Log Pope begged for help from the gods, and his please was justly answered. Bathed in light, Hashirama Senju took up the powers of the log, and as the light left him, he saith, "Let there be logs."'

    (Contributed by Desphere)

    Birth of Konoha, verse 5

    (Contributed by Djinn Crimsora)

    “And lo, did the true friend of the Log gaze upon the land with a heavy heart. For there was nothing but death and devastation as far as the eye could see, and the blighted sand did not accept the blessing of the Log. No root, nor bark, nor sign of growth could combat the taint that filled the air.

    But do not despair, true believers of the one true friend. For upon that wasteland the greatest ally of the Log did speak of hope. “There shall come a day that one of our flock will rise with the times, and bring the true word back to this land. He will know of our path and show it to others so that they may show it to others. Upon that time, this cursed land shall bloom in friendship and harmony.”

    So we wait and plan for the day of enlightenment, upon which the truth will spread and shelter us in its all-encompassing shade.”

    Book of the Oak, A collection of musings of the Log Sage Kin upon the borders of Wind Country

    (Contributed by AnothVortex)

    The Holy Log and I

    A beginners guide for the ways of the Log

    This guide is for the beginning Log acolyte with a small amount of commandments and tips to start with your training into the ways of the Log

    From the Book of the Holy Log these commandments were given to the very first Log Pope - a ninja called Woody - by the Great Tree of Life which still stands to the day in Rogugakure (Village Hidden in the Log), the epicenter of all Log believers.

    Commandments

    1 Thou shalt never hurt a Log purposely.

    2 Thou shalt take care of the Log and the Log shalt take care of thee.

    3 Every 365 Moon Cycles thou shalt make a crusade to the Great Tree and make an offering so the Log will prosper.

    4 When thou commits heresy thou will be transformed to a disgraced Log and will burn Eternally in the unholy fires of Hell.

    5 When thou has died and lived the ways of the Log dutifully thou shalt take place in the afterlife in the Forest of Life.

    These are the Primary Commandments and you must obey them always. When your training progresses you shall learn more of them.

    Nevertheless here are tips to live by the Log:

    1) Always use Rice Paper. Using Log Paper is frowned upon.

    2) At least pray thrice a day to the Great Tree.

    3) Try, with thy utmost effort, to spread the Holy Teachings of Log.

    4) When evil is committed to an Log commit justice to the heretic. ( Keep in mind that 95% of the world are disbelievers and that these rules are not used in the government system so act discretely.)

    5) When you make an offering to the Great Tree always be respectful, even if the Great Tree does not answer.

    6) They will find a companion in a Log with which thee should go everywhere, and it shalt become thy travelers Log.

    7) Where Holy life sap is spilled plant a seed there so a tree may prosper there.

    8) When writing the apology to the Log who saved your life name at least 5 reasons why you could not act otherwise.

    9) When a log Priest or Pope is nearby greet him and the Log he carries.

    10) If you follow the ways dutifully the Log Pope may grant you with some life sap of the Greet Tree itself! Drink it and may you be closer to the Tree and the Log.

    11) When one of the messengers of the Tree itself is nearby bow for him for the Great Log Sage will only grace the holiest of worshipers with his advice, whether through messenger or not.

    12) Embrace the Squirrel Summons as your companions if they grace you with their presence.

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