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Joined Jun '10

Update on my shoulder! It's getting better! Just 6-8 weeks of physical therapy and I'll be all better! That means more updates! :D


One more thing, you should go http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6658795/2/PJO_Best_of_Awards_2010 and vote for me for best authour of the year and vote for my OC, Izabell Crew, for best OC. That would encourage me to write ;)


Thalia's performance dress in Perlia:

http:///shop/1123-3341-thickbox/resistance-child-ballet-lyrical-dance-costume.jpg

(Just imagine it sea green)

Thalia's performance makeup for Perlia:

http:///2011/01/taylor-swift-makeup-in-tears-on-my-guitar.jpg

(Just imagine it brighter)


Will you please review my story?

I'd be glad to review your story. However, before asking me to review your story, you must:

a) make sure that you have gone over it and checked for spelling and grammar mistakes to the best of your ability.

b) Made sure that each chapter of the fic you want me to reviews is one thousand words long or more.

c) Have no switching of POVs in your fic. There are a few good fics with POVs in them, but since most are pathetic, I'd rather not risk making someone angry.

d) I would suggest taking this quiz to make sure your character (if OC) is not Mary Sue or Gary Stu.

e) If you are using anybody's characters, make sure they are in character.

f) No bold. I mean, if it's in an author's note, that's fine (but don't make the author's note too long) but while it may be easier to read for you, it is extremely hard to read for the majority of the human beings on this planet which is why books are not in bold. Also, if you want to put extra umph on a word, use italics, not bold.

Now, know that I will judge your fic like everyone else's fic. If I give you a flame, that means it probably is terrible. I tend to be much more gentle on fics that people have PMed me asking me to review, however, if it is just so pathetic it's...well, pathetic and I am highly suspicious you broke the "must be 13 and over to join fanfiction.net" rule, I will indeed flame you. And by "flame" I mean, "You really need to work on the grammar, especially around quotations. Also, your characters are all Mary Sue."

If it is ultra-bad, expect worse.

I know I sound mean, but after well over a year of seeing this:

percy and annabeth went to the mall and saw grover and said "hi" and then went to the moves and saw batman and got popcorn and saw rachel and said "hi". "hi" rachel said. annabeth started 2 cry cuz she htought percy didn't liek hr.


Will you please beta my fic?

Being a beta-reader is a long, complicated job and will take a lot of my time, so I will not beta someone's fic if they only PM me saying, "Will you be my beta?"

If you would like me to beta your fic, PM me asking me to beta it. Include:

1. The general plot of your fic.

2. What you want me to do as a beta if you have any specifics. If not, ignore this.

I beta fics that have potential, and I'm just asking, but can you try to use good grammar? Not to sound like a teacher or something, but usually, if someone PMs me in horrific grammar, that is also how they write. Now, I mean, I'm not saying flawless. Just don't type in chatspeak.

Also...

a) Make sure that you have gone over it and checked for spelling and grammar mistakes to the best of your ability.

b) Made sure that each chapter of the fic you want me to reviews is one thousand words long or more. I will only give some acceptions (100 word challenges, drabbles, poems, ect.)

c) Have no POVs in your fic. Or just know how to do it well.

d) Make sure your chapter is not Mary Sue.

e) If you are using anybody's characters, make sure they are in character.


´╗┐Got any book suggestions? Oh yeah, feel free to PM me at any time. Whether you have a question about my stories, or if you want someone to talk to.


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