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Joined Jan '13

Stories :

Flash Goddes of... : chapter 3 has a few words written in it, the fight scene with Sasori is difficult to write as Yoruichi could just use Utsusemi or Shunko and KO Sasori in an instant, chapter 4 has a lot more to it. Chapter 5 had a lot to it, until it got scrapped as I want to rework some aspects of the story and it became irrelevant. Where as before I didn't have a plan about getting her to fight a cha. I wanted her to fight now I've finally found a way to do it, the problem is with the ramifications of the battle as the story would take a rather dark turn with it.

Reign of Golden Darkness : still stuck planning out a very large story arc that involves Norihiro and his plans. The changes made to Konoha, clan politics, dealing with the Uchiha clan, her travels through the EM nations, training the twins, genin days, the chunin exams and then shippuden with its own arcs are all largely planned out. The part with Norihiro though is very very large as it's ramifications are felt through out the land and involves a lot of people, writting all the different connections and alliance is not easy.

The Travels of... : I had the new chapter written out and it was great, it had a good fight scene and an emotional moment, sadly in between my laptop and computer it got lost alongside the story plan and I haven't been able to write up a chapter that measured up the lost one. The good news is that the new chapter has 1600 words, while the emotional impacts isn't as great as I want just yet it is better then nothing, I do have a new story plan for it as well though and a small fight scene with Jiraya for another chapter has a few words in it as well.

Reach for the stars : not going to lie, I wrote myself into a corner with Danzo and the Uchiha clan for chapter 2, the fight scene with Itachi is partialy written out as are the consequences of it, sadly the events surrounding the incident have gotten a bit murky with Minato still being around. The story also has a lot of the future arcs written out, a martial arts tournament arc, the future fights and wars, the future abilities of Naruto, Yuki, Minato, Kushina, Hinata, Mikoto, Sasuke and Satsuki are also written out. Heck I already have some of the fight scenes sketched out for Shippuden, but I can't seem to get past the block I myself have created with Minato being alive and not a shit head.

And the last bit of news is that all of my beta's have bailed on me, a part of them have contacted me at least to inform me of why that they can't help out anymore for one reason of another, which am I am grateful for. The rest have just bailed on me for no real reason even after I contacted them and they assured me that they were working on it and then bailed, so it's back to just me checking everything.


https://www dot youtube dot com/watch?v=3YRI5qk6KZY

Polls :

https://www dot fanfiction dot net/forum/Just-a-forum-for-my-polls/147170/


First person to add me to their Favorite Authors list: hc.dbz.chickie

First person to favor a story of mine (The Travels of Juubi and Sage): applebeecool.


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[1] – Link to the map I’m using for the story Reign of Golden Darkness :

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/World-Map-Reign-of-Golden-Darkness-421183237

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/World-Map-Reign-of-Golden-Darkness-smaller-land-421183632

[2,3] – Land of Earth, simple regional map numbered version

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/Land-of-Earth-Only-Provinces-421197554

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/Land-of-Earth-Province-Numbers-421197565

[4] –Land of Earth, new region

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/Land-of-Earth-Provinces-new-one-421197574

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/Land-of-Earth-Provinces-Numbers-new-region-421197570

A game of shogi between the gods, known lands

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/A-game-of-shogi-between-the-gods-belived-map-434793982

http://amidamaru88 dot deviantart dot com/art/A-game-of-Shogi-map-numbers-458588232


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