HATE. HATE. HAAAATE. HATE ANYTHING THAT IS NOT NARUHINA! NARUHAREM IS FINE, but HINATA must be added, i don't care what level of the harem she is or the freaking importance of character in the story. BUT she has to be in the harem!
COMPLETELY DESPISE SASUHINA. FUCKING LOATHE IT WITH ALL MY BEING. WHY SUCH ANGER FOR IT? WELL... WELLL... BESIDE THE FLUNKING FACT IT HAS NO POSSIBILITY TO BE CANON! ALMOST ALL of the fucking stories in this pair are SEX related. AND OUT of those, it is CANON sasuke weezling her away from Naruto[who is totally uncanon most of the time]. I think you see many problems with that, as do i! NEXT. HINATA character is always shawllow and stupid! AND PLUS, please note i also hate this pairing too. IF FUCKING HINATA HAD TO GO FOOOORRRR ANY MOTHER FLANKING OTHER GUY! IT FUCKING WOULDN'T BE SASUKE! IT WOULD BE FUCKING LEE OR KIBA, cause they are the closet you can get to someone also like naruto in the fucking FANDOM. I hate both pairings also.
Hate Modern Naruto stories. Why? well THEY ARE ALL THE FUCKING SAME, AND STUPID MOST OF THE TIME.
What kind of stories do i read? Actively updated stories. I am not a dedicated writer so you can like suck it right there. Hugs? Uh no... I LIKE STORIES WITH ORIGINALLITY AND FUCKING INTERESTING AND IS NOT AFRAID OF THE FUCKING M RATING!
THAT NOTHING BUT M RATED LANGUAGE. MOST OF ALL, HAVE LEMONS! DON'T BE AFRAID, OR EVEN LIMES. LIMES ARE SCENES WHERE YOU SHOW IN DETAIL THE KISSING, CLOTHES REMOVING, REACTIONS TO EACH OTHER. AND MILD BREAST SUCKLING. THEN SKIP. That's a lime, anything less is laziness at its purity.
I'M STORMING THE NARUTO UNIVERSE WITH HARSH REVIEWS. Not Flames. BUT Honest criticism of your story. And you as a writer if you do anything to distract from the story at all.
That is all.