Olfrik PM
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Joined Dec '05
Hello everyone!
Strategic Retreat was my first try on HP fanfiction. Naturally (or not), it failed.
The story ran away from the plot and I therefore started over again, after working on my plot and a lot of thinking about how to write it.
Special thanks to the people at DLP for giving me insights in how to write better.
Now that I am fairly sure that it wont happen again, I present the first chapter of my new story.
Sorry guys, but the old one will be abandoned.
If anyone is interested in beta-ing the story, feel free to contact me.
And a last warning: English is not my mother tongue, but I promise I will try my best.
Cheers,
The frik